it's a little better
throws up questions though:
how are you expecting to do final mixing/monitoring - always through the es9 or with an external mixer?
I would drop the tritone and compressor
kick hat snare are next to each other - so very cramped - each of those modules is 1.16cm wide - you may want to spread them out a bit in reality
I would swap the doepfer matrix mixer for something a bit smaller - AISynthesis does a 10hp one!!
spread the vcas about
unless you are smitten with the Milky Way I would swap in an fx aid xl - more options for effects - similar hardware
"some of the best base-level info to remember can be found in Jim's sigfile" @Lugia
Utility modules are the dull polish that makes the shiny modules actually shine!!!
sound sources < sound modifiers < modulation sources < utilities